x_cannonball May 27 2003, 17:07:49 UTC Wow! I'm real impressed. Much better'n mine. :)
x_crowdofone May 27 2003, 22:23:25 UTC Hey, I've seen yours, and it's good.
Also, it's done, which is a lot more than I can say. :)
x_psylocke May 27 2003, 23:01:01 UTC You have a way with words that makes this "an experience."
I am eager to see how you will end it. I absolutely love the way the words dance off one's tongue while reading.
I must say, as I've been making my rounds through everyone's LiveJournal, I must reiterate this fact. No more self-depreciating posts on supposed bad poetry. Your piece is off to a great start and can't wait to see the final edit.
I'll be available to you tomorrow evening, if you care to discuss your poem further.
x_crowdofone May 28 2003, 00:28:17 UTC Thanks. :) I've finished it now if you want to take another look--and I wasn't trying to put myself down too much, honest, just saying parts were tough to get out and sounded a little random. I actually really like the way it ended, only I'm not sure if I really managed to put in the declarative statement that doesn't make sense. (I tried to mix it in with the personification, but . . .)
What time tomorrow?
x_psylocke May 28 2003, 07:07:10 UTC *smirks*
Since you went to bed pretty late last night. How about four in the afternoon?
If not, I'll be in my office until 6p.m. Don't forget to bring all your edits with you.
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May 27 2003, 17:07:49 UTC
Wow! I'm real impressed. Much better'n mine. :)
x_crowdofone
May 27 2003, 22:23:25 UTC
Hey, I've seen yours, and it's good.
Also, it's done, which is a lot more than I can say. :)
x_psylocke
May 27 2003, 23:01:01 UTC
You have a way with words that makes this "an experience."
I am eager to see how you will end it. I absolutely love the way the words dance off one's tongue while reading.
I must say, as I've been making my rounds through everyone's LiveJournal, I must reiterate this fact. No more self-depreciating posts on supposed bad poetry. Your piece is off to a great start and can't wait to see the final edit.
I'll be available to you tomorrow evening, if you care to discuss your poem further.
x_crowdofone
May 28 2003, 00:28:17 UTC
Thanks. :) I've finished it now if you want to take another look--and I wasn't trying to put myself down too much, honest, just saying parts were tough to get out and sounded a little random. I actually really like the way it ended, only I'm not sure if I really managed to put in the declarative statement that doesn't make sense. (I tried to mix it in with the personification, but . . .)
What time tomorrow?
x_psylocke
May 28 2003, 07:07:10 UTC
*smirks*
Since you went to bed pretty late last night. How about four in the afternoon?
If not, I'll be in my office until 6p.m. Don't forget to bring all your edits with you.